Sample Papers Response

I read sample paper 1, and I felt that this paper was very interesting. I found it enjoyable to read because of how well the writer was able to relate a quote from the book back to the book itself. I felt that the writer was able to describe the story and used enough quotes so that the reader could get some context as to where the writer was coming from. This to me made this paper much more understandable and related, which made it much easier to read/follow. In my opinion, this paper was very convincing because the writer was able to relate the story about the "stupid horse" back to the book, and they were able to do so with a strong use of quality quotes. The writers use of quotes emphasized how the "stupid horse" related to the book and made their points much more understandable. Also, because of the writers well thought out and explained topic sentences, the paper was very easy to read and comprehend.